{"id":3399,"date":"2013-02-15T09:05:45","date_gmt":"2013-02-15T14:05:45","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/commons.trincoll.edu\/edreform\/?p=3399"},"modified":"2013-02-15T09:05:45","modified_gmt":"2013-02-15T14:05:45","slug":"avoiding-plagiarism-14","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/commons.trincoll.edu\/edreform\/2013\/02\/avoiding-plagiarism-14\/","title":{"rendered":"Avoiding Plagiarism"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Example 1: Plagiarize the original text by copying portions of it word-for-word<\/p>\n<p>Diane Ravitch argues against using student test scores to decide if an individual teacher is effective. She reports that Sean Corcoran, an economist at New York University, found that that the average \u201cmargin of error\u201d of a New York City teacher was plus or minus 28 points.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Example 2: Plagiarize the original text by paraphrasing its structure too closely, without copying it word-for-word<\/p>\n<p>The evidence of Corcoran says that there is an average \u201cmargin of error\u201d of plus or minus 28 points, making it unpredictable to judge a teacher from year to year because between each year these value-added scores may change, causing these results to be instable. These flaws make it challenging to trust the results of the student test scores.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Example 3: Plagiarize the original text by paraphrasing its structure too closely, and include citation<\/p>\n<p>Diane Ravitch uses the evidence of economist Sean Corcoran to prove that the \u201cmargin of error\u201d between teachers to too large and that the scores fluctuate between years. As a consequence, this makes the value-added scores to be hard to trust.<\/p>\n<p>Works Cited:<\/p>\n<p>Ravitch, Diane. <em>The Death and Life of the Great American School System: How Testing and Choice are Undermining Education, Revised and Expanded Edition. <\/em>New York: Basic Books, 2010.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Example 4: Properly paraphrase from the original text by restating the author\u2019s ideas in different words and phrases, and include a citation to the original source<\/p>\n<p>By using the evidence presented by an economist at New York University, Sean Corcoran, Ravitch proves that the \u201cmargin of error\u201d is too large to have a teachings ranking actually hold merit. Furthermore, this \u201cmargin of error\u201d varies each year as well as the rankings of teachings, there by creating unreliable data.<a title=\"\" href=\"#_ftn1\">[1]<\/a><\/p>\n<p>Works Cited:<\/p>\n<p>Ravitch, Diane. <em>The Death and Life of the Great American School System: How Testing and Choice are Undermining Education, Revised and Expanded Edition. <\/em>New York: Basic Books, 2010.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Example 5: Properly paraphrase from the original text by restating the author\u2019s ideas in different words and phrases, add a direct quote, and include a citation to the original source<\/p>\n<p>Diane Ravitch makes a case that the value-added scores to judge teachers are unreliable. With the evidence from an economist from New York University, which states that \u201cthe average \u2018margin of error\u2019 of a New York City teacher was plus or minus 28 points\u201d,<a title=\"\" href=\"#_ftn2\">[2]<\/a> which means that the rankings of teachers is invalid.<\/p>\n<p>Works Cited:<\/p>\n<p>Ravitch, Diane. <em>The Death and Life of the Great American School System: How Testing and Choice are Undermining Education, Revised and Expanded Edition. <\/em>New York: Basic Books, 2010.<\/p>\n<div>\n<hr align=\"left\" size=\"1\" width=\"33%\" \/>\n<div>\n<p><a title=\"\" href=\"#_ftnref\">[1]<\/a> Diane Ravitch, <em>The Death and Life of the Great American School System: How Testing and Choice are Undermining Education, Revised and Expanded Edition <\/em>(New York: Basic Books, 2010), 270-271.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<div>\n<p><a title=\"\" href=\"#_ftnref\">[2]<\/a> Diane Ravitch, <em>The Death and Life of the Great American School System: How Testing and Choice are Undermining Education, Revised and Expanded Edition <\/em>(New York: Basic Books, 2010), 270-271.<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Example 1: Plagiarize the original text by copying portions of it word-for-word Diane Ravitch argues against using student test scores to decide if an individual teacher is effective. She reports that Sean Corcoran, an economist at New York University, found that that the average \u201cmargin of error\u201d of a New York City teacher was plus &hellip; <a href=\"http:\/\/commons.trincoll.edu\/edreform\/2013\/02\/avoiding-plagiarism-14\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading <span class=\"screen-reader-text\">Avoiding Plagiarism<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":175,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":[],"categories":[17],"tags":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/commons.trincoll.edu\/edreform\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3399"}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/commons.trincoll.edu\/edreform\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/commons.trincoll.edu\/edreform\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/commons.trincoll.edu\/edreform\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/175"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/commons.trincoll.edu\/edreform\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=3399"}],"version-history":[{"count":3,"href":"http:\/\/commons.trincoll.edu\/edreform\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3399\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":3403,"href":"http:\/\/commons.trincoll.edu\/edreform\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3399\/revisions\/3403"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/commons.trincoll.edu\/edreform\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=3399"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/commons.trincoll.edu\/edreform\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=3399"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/commons.trincoll.edu\/edreform\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=3399"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}